Monday, March 19, 2012

Our awesome presentation blog

1. Create a strategy and a plan of action for how you will relate your session to all the previous ones.

2. Create a character profile for the main character of each story. Who are they? What are they carrying and why?
Stockings: The main character of this story was Henry Dobbins. He was a good man and a good soldier. Henry Dobbins was a big strong man with good intentions, a good friend who was always there when you needed him, a believer in the virtues of simplicity and directness and hard labor. He carried his girlfriends pantyhose, because he said they were his good luck charm. He would breathe in the scent and was intrigued by the memories it brought back. The pantyhose gave him access to a spiritual world, a world of hope that he would come home alive and get to see his girlfriend again. Even after his girlfriend dumped him he still used the pantyhose as a good luck charm insisting the magic didn’t go away.
Style: The main characters of this story are Azar, Henry Dobbins, Lieutenant Cross & the dancing girl. Henry Dobbins carries his girlfriends pantyhose for good luck. Lieutenant Cross carried letters from Martha, a girl he is obsessed with. He feels safe reading them and likes the fantasies they bring. The girl just dances because it is her way of coping with her dead family and she likes to dance.
Night Life: The main character of this story is Rat Kiley. He is a good medic and a good soldier. His intentions are good, and he helps his fellow soldiers whenever they need him or are hurt. He seems like nice guy that just likes comic books, however he has a hard time telling the truth, and sometimes stretches the truth in his stories. He carried many things from comic books to a satchel full of medication because he was a medic to brandy and M&M’s candy.
3. What is important about “style?” What does the title come to mean?
Style is important because it is one persons way of expressing themselves. The girl had a specific style of dancing and enjoyed doing it, but Azar felt the need to mock her dancing and do the same but as a joke. The girl expressed herself by her method of dancing that she enjoyed very much. She wasn’t doing it to be funny or to get made fun of, she was dancing simply because she liked to dance. Dancing may have helped her cope with the loss of her family. The title comes to mean that everyone has their own style in order to express themselves. Expressing yourself is important because everyone is different and entitled to their own styles. The title gives meaning to the story and shows that this girl had a different tradition of dancing than the American soldiers did.
4. What types of bravery might the stories convey?
All three stories convey different types of bravery. The main characters in these stories are all brave men for participating in the war in the first place. It takes a lot for one man to go to war. In “Stockings” I think there are two types of bravery conveyed; emotional and spiritual. Henry Dobbins was always drawn towards sentimentality and the pantyhose as his good luck charm gave him access to a spiritual world, where things were soft and intimate. In “Style” I think the type of bravery shown is moral courage. Azar feels the need to mimic the girls dancing which is wrong, his intentions may have been good but he acted out disrespectfully about someone’s style of dancing that he didn’t understand. In “Night Life” I think this story conveys emotional courage. Rat Kiley fears operation and doesn’t know if he’s cut out to be a medic. He states that body parts haunt him at night and the soldiers that passed seemed so alive, then so dead. He was so nervous and freaking out that he shot himself in the foot to cause his own injury and be dismissed from duty.
5. Why do some men love war? Consider passages in the stories that could help answer or dispute the question.
Some men love war because they agree with what they are fighting for. They will give everything to defend their country and fight for what they believe in. The men get to mock the values they are fighting for. War gives them a sense of danger, a reason to act brutally and harshly. Why some men love war is built off of contradictory reasons, some easily discussed while others are hard to talk about. The love of war stems from a variety of different things such as destruction, beauty and horror, love and death. Going to war gives them a sense of bravery and loyalty to their country as well as heroism for defending their country.
6. Discuss the style of writing in these stories: word choice, imagery, figurative language, sentence type, etc.
Each story conveys a different meaning because each story focuses on a different character. The word choice, imagery, and language in “Night Life” is a little softer and more sympathetic given that Rat Kiley is the main character and it discusses how he is afraid of operation, and becomes so emotional that he injures himself just to get called off duty. The word choice, imagery, and language in “Style” for example expresses how harsh Azar was for making fun of the girls dancing and mimicking her for no reason. Henry Dobbins becomes angry with Azar’s disrespect and tells him to dance right or he will drop him down the well for being so disrespectful to the girls style of dancing and emotions. In “Stockings” the word choice, imagery, and language was average because it was just a story about how a good man used his girlfriends pantyhose as a good luck charm, it was a short story about how the magic helped him feel safe and kept him going through tough times.
7. Compare what you learn about the characters in these three stories to what you learned about them in the first story, “The things they carried.” Have they changed? Has your impression of them changed? Why and how?
I think that a couple characters made a turn around from their personalities and motives in the beginning of the book to the end. Lieutenant Cross used to be obsessed with Martha and would carry around letters that he hoped were love letters, and fantasize about all the things he would do to Martha if she were there, etc. He blames himself for the deaths of Ted Lavender and Kiowa because he had been so occupied with his unrealistic love with Martha, and his tendency to follow orders despite his better judgement. As the story progresses he gets better at putting the Alpha Company first and his unrealistic love for Martha second. He does the best he can to keep his men safe and be a better leader, as well as use his better judgement and not second guess it. Another character I think made a small turn around was Azar. He started off as a disrespectful, cruel, unsympathetic soldier who didn’t care about anyone’s feelings and would do mean things just to get a laugh or two. He made fun of a young girl dancing because her style was different than most but she just enjoyed dancing. My impression of him changed when he demonstrated some kind of humanity and was forced to help pull Kiowa’s body from the sewage field. That moment of remorse he shared probed that their a a breaking point for every soldier even one who uses cruelty as their defense mechanism.
8. What kind of multi-media, documents, and sources can you use to make your presentation a solid, coherent, in-depth, and challenging? Keep in mind that you have to use the book, no matter what.
I can use a variety of different text from the stories as well as audio clips that have to do with the Vietnam War, along with pictures or video’s portraying the Vietnamese War and the conditions of the soldiers in it. I can also use clips portraying the characters in the stories. To make my presentation a solid, coherent, in-depth, and challenging I can use trivia that quiz’s the class on the stories so they understand what they read and can experience in depth what the character went through. Each story shared a different point of view from a different character, along with what they carried and why they carried it. Each man was different and conveyed different aspects such as bravery. Some were more emotional, some more spiritual, etc. To further understand the personalities of the characters the class would need to be aware of what they were reading and develop their own interpretations of the character.
9. How will you ensure that the audience participates attentively throughout?
To ensure that the audience participates attentively throughout the presentation my group is making a quiz about each of the stories to challenge the class on what they read, and to help them further understand the stories, and understand the different characters. I think this is a good idea because it will help keep the class intrigued and paying attention throughout the presentation as well as listen and understand what they are listening to as well as reading themselves.

Wednesday, March 14, 2012

Group Discussion


We are currently reading a work of fiction closely, and we are preparing for student-led discussion sessions. What are your expectations? What do you expect from your group? What do you expect from the other students in the class? What do you expect from me, the teacher?

My expectations for our group led discussion are that the class will come well prepared. The students will be engaged in the discussion and will want to keep the conversation going. My expectations for our group are that well we asking leading questions for the class to answer and have a lot of material to present. My expectations for the teacher are that he will guide us in the right direction if we veer off path and that he will help the discussion go smoothly.

Thursday, February 9, 2012

The Things I'd Carry

If I were to go away forever and could only take 5 things I would bring; my laptop, my snuffy, my glasses, a watch and my phone. These are the most important "material" things to me. My boyfriend bought me a stuffed animal named snuffy and I can't go on vacation without it cause it's like a little piece of him. I am almost legally blind so I need my glasses especially if I'm going on vacation so I can see all the beautiful sights. I would need to pack my watch because without it I feel naked. I like to be on time for things and without a watch I'd be lost. I would need to take my phone so I can keep in touch with all of my friends and family back home. Op? H. Y

Friday, January 27, 2012

Grendel and The Shaper


In Grendel, the shaper paints a picture of a beautiful world in Hart. Even though this world that he had created is fictional, people believe him. The shaper’s stories give the people hope that the world could be a better, happier place and they want that so they believe him. Grendel’s true story isn’t as happy and bright as the shapers therefore people don’t want to listen to him. No one wants to listen to a pessimist. I couldn’t find an artist that actually paints these pictures but I did find a person that wanted to believe in brighter days. After the Chinese revolution the Chinese wanted a happier more fulfilling life. Mao Zedong promised his people that things would get better. He painted this picture of the perfect life that could only be created after the revolution. Unfortunately Mao’s plans failed and the Chinese Revolution wasn’t as successful as they planned. The Chinese people were optimists and they wanted to believe anything Mao said, just like the people of Hart. They wanted a better life so they were optimistic and fell into the lies of the shaper. This angered Grendel because he saw the savage past and no one believed him.  

Friday, January 20, 2012

America

America 
By Claude McKay

Although she feeds me bread of bitterness,
And sinks into my throat her tiger's tooth,
Stealing my breath of life, I will confess
I love this cultured hell that tests my youth.
Her vigor flows like tides into my blood,
Giving me strength erect against her hate,
Her bigness sweeps my being like a flood.
Yet, as a rebel fronts a king in state,
I stand within her walls with not a shred
Of terror, malice, not a word of jeer.
Darkly I gaze into the days ahead,
And see her might and granite wonders there,
Beneath the touch of Time's unerring hand,
Like priceless treasures sinking in the sand.

Claude is expressing his frustrations about America but he is also expressing some love for his country. " I love this cultured hell that tests my youth" meaning he loves the ups and downs that Americans bring that keep up on his toes. He also expresses that time is ticking sad isn't going to stop.

Friday, December 9, 2011

Rondeau


             Rondeau
Jenny kissed me when we met,
            Jumping from the chair she sat in;
Time, you thief, who love to get
            Sweets into your list put that in:
Say I’m weary, say I’m sad,
Say that health and wealth have missed me,
Say that growing old, but add,
            Jenny kissed me
- Leigh Hunt

I think that Leigh Hunt wrote this poem to show that hard times don’t get him down. Even though he is having trouble with money and his health, he is still going strong. Leigh still feels as though his life is at its peak because Jenny kissed him.  This poem illustrates that health and wealth aren’t the most important things in life and love is everlasting.

Thursday, December 8, 2011

Fire and Ice


Fire and Ice
Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I’ve tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice
- Robert Frost   

I chose the poem Fire and Ice by Robert Frost because it relates to the 2012 apocalypse.  I thought that it was ironic that Robert Frost was thinking that the world was going to end the same way that we think its going to end and its been decades since his poem was written. I like this poem because it is saying that either way the world will be ending whether you like it or not.